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Dusk

Life,
a poets muse.
Time
disappears
like light
before we choose.
I will use the day
to dance,
to move.

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  • poppa
    February 15, 2008

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    Like this shorty, a lot.......portrays a positive optimistic outlook on life....very well done ....peace

  • Just4u
    January 17, 2008

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    Hopes, reflections we all use
    to try to share our deeds
    Introspection in the mix
    to help to tell our needs

    A day of worry's but a waste
    if only held in mind
    But in the end it can be shared
    through a stanza filled with rhyme

    Hugs...Eddy