Why do you push me away my love for you will never fade.I will fly to you through the darkest day....
the darkness pulls me down braking me down,i can't love you any more
the darkness keeps me down braking me down, how can i love you any more.
AS the new day comes the light fads away darkness takes the day.
the day is still new but i see the darkness throw you....
the darkness pulls me down braking me down,i can't love you any more
the darkness keeps me down braking me down, how can i love you any more.
Why did you tell me that you love me.was it some thing to do.
you used the word but how can any one love you
the darkness pulls me down braking me down,i can't love you any more
the darkness keeps me down braking me down, how can i love you any more.
the darkness pulls me down braking me down,i can't love you any more
the darkness keeps me down braking me down, how can i love you any more.
it is done i been working on it and it is done
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aww this is really good i enjoyed this..
lots of sadness within it
though
but i can totally relate.
Great write..
x O x
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i like it
i like it... it is really unique! i really like it...
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This is lovely, you really should make this into a real song, it would be an awesome hit!
I can truly understand the emotion behind it and where its coming from.
♥
Kaela -
this is really good
i get where your coming from
it was really well written i really liked this one -
Well written piece. The depth of your sorrow and love is apparent in each word, and I really get how important those feelings are to you.
I'm personally a stickler for spelling and what not, but I won't take points off for those, since it's not really necessary to make the power of your words show. Great stuff! -
This is a pretty kick butt poem Ecarioto! Great job! Although I am not sure this fits exactly what I have gone through, its close and very good! -Liz
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Hmm..
This sounds like the kinda music I listen to.
Im not sure if I can relate though.. I've had my heart broken but I've gotten through it. And never like you've had yours broken. I'm sorry you've had to deal with this.
If you ever need to talk feel free to IM me.<3
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I really like this
Its awesome. They words fit into rhythm, which is good for song lyrics and I can imaine these words to music . Well done
Libbi xXx -
nice
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hey this is really awesome! love is one of the things at soothes us and yet int he end we get hurt by its hidden sting. the first three lines are nice! keep up the great work!
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NICE!!!!!!!!!!!
Dude if you don't have a band i would so be willing to sing this for you and give you cred!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Great song
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Wow the song came out good graet excellent it has the potential of beocme a a awesome hit
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Wow i really like the beginning of this unfinished song its really good really ood.....reminds me of myself....a lot....well i can't wait till you finish it so i can read it
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so far its good. reminds me a lot of a Linkin Park song, i like the repetition. keep it up, can't wait to read more.
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nice very well wrote.
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Wow, this is very well written, shows a lot of emotion. "AS the new day comes the light fads away darkness takes the day." That was my most favorite line throughout your song. Very powerful, great job !
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