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Someone I Love

My god with mysterious heir
The only guy who draws my stare
His eyes pierce through me
forever I could love thee
if only youd give me the chance
then perhaps together we could dance
your touch makes me shiver
to my heart your arrow can deliver
the drug of love
fits on me like a glove
I know this sounds cheesy
but, dude, you make me queasy
miss you when your gone
no matter how long
the music of my soul
somehow you stole
I will never be the same
because of this 'game'
Ill love you till the end
when together
our own heaven we'll attend.

Author notes

It sounds corny I know, but I haven't written in a while and I had to write something about someone somewhat close to me. I might have exaggerated a few details, but yeah, deal with it. Comments much appreciated.

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