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The Past Remains

My eyes linger on a single image, unforgettable
I see us together. We're now apart, it's quite regrettable
The tall building surround as we dance and we sway
All in darkness by the light of the moon's day

It's not something easily condoned
If I could, in a heart-beat the thought would be disowned

But sadly, it's mine forever. There is no escape
I needs to be stopped before it can take shape

 

At last my mind this thought attains

And I've now realized, the past remains

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Okay this was inspired by this picture soooo. Clicky and follow the link please. It will make more sense. Have fun.

http://www.gallery71.com/dynamic/images/display/Thomas_Barbey_New_Tearful_Encounter_659_303.jpg

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