I feel my heart is torn in two
By my thoughts concerning you
Most of me wants to never let go
A little bit just doesn't know
Am I strong enough for you
After all we've gone through
I say it's worth it, you disagree
I think it's love, but maybe it's just me
Can love survive if one looses the spark
I'm left to wonder while you're alone in the dark
My flame is burning, just a strong as in the beginning
Back when your heart was all I was winning
I still fall hard every time you speak
Your kisses still make me weak
Are you still the person who set me on fire
To say I've changed would make me a liar
Or maybe I'm just too blind to see
You've lost what you saw in me
For you perhaps the passion is gone
I'm left to wake alone each dawn
Rolling over wondering what I lost
Realizing I found it, but still payed a cost
My heart still belongs to you
You took it and kept it, so what am I to do?
Author notes
This is probably hard for most people to follow. I wrote it randomly when I was having a really bad day...just let me know what you think. Thanks to Omni for the title suggestion
Written December 14, 2007
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beautiful poem, and I really enjoy this one very much. I love the thoughts you put into this poem, beautiful! blessings always ~Trisha~
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this was not hard to follow at all... great job putting yout thoughts into words...I thinl a good title would be... What am I to do
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I love this, it could have been written from my heart. as it tells how I feel so often lately. I lost the love of the most wonderful man, and i still love him so much. So what am I to do? you can't make someone love you. Thank you for writing this.
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Leave the title!
Wonderful. As someone pointed out, it has a few errors, but overall it reminds me of Dickinson, especially the title. It rambles, yes, but overall it's very cohesive. I like it very much.
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I like
I like most of it. Some of the spelling is wrong, for example "looses", is supposed to be loses. I like it though. 2 smilies.
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MOVING!
I felt a lot of emotion stirring up in me after reading this poem, because i recently got out of a relationship that resebled a lot of the feelings here. But i wasnt on the hurting end, i was the hurter. I can see a lot of depth and passion in this poem. You are very good at letting your feelings flow out to create a wonderful masterpiece. Title suggestions:
+- Love long gone
+- My heart belongs to you
Thanks for posting this amazing write, and hopefully the title suggestions help out.
+- Omni
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Considering this could have been taken from the walls of my own heart..? Yea, amazing piece of work you have penned here! I relate on every level! It hurts to love someone who seems to not feel the same way.....
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This is a great poem. Hope that you keep writing like you did in this poem. You are a great poet. Keep up the great work.
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Can love survive if one looses the spark
I'm left to wonder while you're alone in the dark
i lvoed that line annnnd
My heart still belongs to you
You took it and kept it, so what am I to do?
coolest line ever!!! great job
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