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Painkiller

My pain killer,
My vein filler.
              The sleepy mind state
              The drowzy fate.
My loss of control,
My pain losses toll
              The need although unwant
              The artificial agent, how nonchalant.
My misery and in this state
My desire to see my fate.
              The uncertainty of everything
              The emotions come as a sting.
My lost way, my confusion
My ideas lead me to my own conclusion.
              The killer of pain
              Leaves my heart in vain.

           

Author notes

Don't ask what the hell i was thinking during this...i was just thinking about the sleeping pills and painkillers ive been taking lately...
weird.

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  • Prince Charming
    January 14, 2008

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    Great job!

    I understand your feelings very well. Those pills bring you a lot of times in such a weird dark state. I like the rhyming and the way you build your write up.
    Greetings Herman