Fifteen seconds of heaven,
an eternity of hell.
A risk worth taking,
with a prize as sweet as this.
One swift action,
one I've practiced well.
My whole life I'm staking,
for revenge's sweet kiss.
Your crime not forgotten,
still haunted by your smile.
The abuse I endured,
brands me till date.
A stranger in the dark,
you followed me a while.
The moments that ensued,
now have sealed your fate.
A stranger in the dark,
I watch you stalk your prey.
Today I will know peace,
after many years of unrest.
In this girl I see myself,
but I'm not weak today.
The gun held with ease,
aimed perfectly at your chest.
Her relieved eyes stare,
as your blood pours.
Your tortured soul beckons,
in awe I watch you die.
Your damn sardonic smile,
will torment me no more.
In your last fifteen seconds,
my sinister heaven lies.
Please tell me what you think
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awsome!!!great write, i really liked it!!
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Thank you!!!
Lotsa love..!!
LR!
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wow this is a great write. keep up the awesome work!!!
if this is a true story, sorry. if not, good...imagination...(sorry if somehow that affended u)...
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Lol! why wud it offend me?? im glad u have complimented my imagination thanks.. !!
love.. Lr!
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thanks for sharing
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revenge is sweet as sugar thanks for the memories .............................
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thanks for readin!
Lotsa love.. LR!!
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wow this was a great power full peice, i was hooked from the begining! great write keep it up xxx
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Thanks!
love..
LR!
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great piece i liked it alot. good job!
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thanks
love.. LR!
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WOW
Powerful write...sweet revenge...never again to torture another soul....sometimes we need to apply our own law...thanks for the read
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thank you!
love!
LR!
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wonderful write. the rhyme flowed well, the words didnt seem forced at all and that always wows me. good twist at the end and all in all a good write x thankyou for sharing
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Thank you for ur nice comment!! very much appreciated!.. im writin after a long time..! thank god writers block has partly lifetd!
thanks again!
lotsa love!
LR!
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