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Just Don't

 

Don't remind me it is over 

~my heart still bears the pain

Don't say to dry my tears

~my eyes must release their strain 

 

Don't talk to me of sunshine
~clouds aren't far behind
Don't tell me about happiness
~that's just a state of mind

Don't say good things lay ahead
~that would be a lie
Life's full of empty promises
this you can not deny

Don't speak to me of faith
~once it was all I had
It didn't seem to matter
most things still turned out bad

Don't bore me with more platitudes

they are just cliche'

Over used words and phrases

that are just so blase' 


Don't say it's just a phase
that I am going through
I know what I've lived
I was there, were you?

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    How many times have I wished I could have said just what you have here... no one knows unless they walk in your shoes, can't help thinking they might get a shock if they did.... a shot from and through the heart with this one... I think one for my bookmarks given my own current mood..... wonderfully penned hun

    Karen


  • Desire gold member
    January 13, 2008

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    Wow!!


    Now this is one Powerful piece You have penned Sweet One
    Oy~~

    The energy and the images just tug hard~

    Don't say it's just a phase
    that I am going through
    I know what I've lived
    I was there, were you?

    Wow!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice!
    Best wishes to You in the contest my Friend!
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~