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- Salvation Acts -

 

 

 

 

From all four corners they come swift
to bridge the gap, relinquish rift
with words of Love, Belief compounds.
Light blinds dark, Mana surrounds.

Protectors shield and act to save.
Energy high to make weak brave
for those who speak with ill intent
will find their quest in Hell's torment.

A sharp mind used as tool to carve.
Feed the hungry thus won't starve
and anyone that tries to steal
will work as slave without a meal.

Bad thoughts to conjure pain plus sorrow
sends the demon's dogs to burrow
inside skin to scab make scars
before last breath sealed in jars.

So Soul must clear, also cleanse.
Value moments with kin and friends.
Avoid vengeful acts to foster Hate
before darkness wins without debate.



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  • HaleyMary
    January 17, 2008

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    Beautiful write. I liked the light binding dark. It made me think of how even when life may seem to be like dark times, sometimes better days can come along, at least people can keep hope. Congrats on winning the gold.


  • Swan song gold member
    January 15, 2008

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    Oh I can feel your spel on me sunshine! You crooned in this one dear! congrats on gold


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    Dear friend,

    This one here was written well.

    You show a clear message. One that I can
    see clearly, Thank you.

    Riftkin

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 14, 2008

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    I just sit here and shake my head sometimes when I read your words, where does the inspiration come from, to where do you delve to find such amazing power and beauty.... brilliant hun

    Karen


  • StarEyes
    January 13, 2008

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    Holy Mother of Pearl Jam...Girl!!

    What a read this is!! Wow!!!!!! You have created a powerful read with your magical quill here my friend!!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nettie


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    January 13, 2008

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    This one gave me many lovely visuals, your words ignite, all the best in the contest


  • im only half empty
    January 13, 2008
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    WOW

    I like this one a lot...it's truely amazing and deep.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 12, 2008

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    Wow! This is an amazingly written piece. Love the whole thing. Excellent flow and rhythm. Wonderful word choices for this presentation.

    Thank you for entering and good luck
    Storm


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 12, 2008

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    A most excellent piece, sweetie
    Awesome writing
    Very well done!
    All the best to you in the contest!


  • Bedroom Eyes
    January 12, 2008

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    This is brilliant, Sister Dear!!!!

    Words that ring with even clearer and louder tones to myself personally.

    Nice flow & rhyme, and the images this brings to mind...well...I will keep those to myself

    Great work!!

    Best of luck to you in the contest!!




  • penman gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    Excellent

    Terrific piece you have penned. Truly full of your magic quill. Best of luck in the contest.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 12, 2008

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    OOOOOOOH the flow in this piece is right on!!!!
    Love it the meaning is very powerful too.
    best of luck to you in the contest.

    Love,
    Delila

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