Rain apon the window rings
Beneith it, a baby bird with broken wings
There is no feeling but the panic of fear
Falling, tears of agony with no one to hear
On my tongue the blood i taste
a fragile life, oh such a waste
Silent tears filled with pain and sorrow
a few more minutes of life i borrow
My suffering is at and end
My heart is far too broken to mend
Letting go, i cannot fly
and so,
silently,
unnoticed
i die
Author notes
i have never considered suicide, i just feel so tortured and alone
A contest entry
- Dark poems by Stormy Days.
300 points, ended January 24, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Despair of the worst kind, what else is there to do but let it consume you. I like this poem very much.
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Woah. I loved that. I can relate with it so much...I love:
Letting go, i cannot fly
and so,
silently,
unnoticed
i die
I just adored it. well done...im going off to read more of your work...
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i love this poem. it describes how i feel sometimes...
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so much felling and very good thanks for entering
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why do you feel tortured and alone???
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im not sure. just do
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wow touching my fav line is on my tongue the blooi taste a fragile life oh such a waste
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yes, i enjoy blood too
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