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fist of fury

As I type this

piece one handed

my vision starts to dim

some would call me crazy

some would call it a sin.

But when I saw this contest

I was stricken by a thought

my jar of lube is empty.

Yes! the one that I just bought.

A contest entry

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  • Whispering Wind gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    now that the lube is gone guess it must be time to go home thank you so for the laugh...i really needed that congrats on trophy


  • FifthDove gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    oHm... lol very interesting poem here and I think I need to find my glasses now best wishesCindy


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 12, 2008
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    love this one and you did an awesome job with the words getting smaller.