The only thing I found
In the fist of the mist
is the spirit
of [none]
the spirit of [none]
is the spirit of no one
the spirit of [none]
is the life split in two
the spirit of [none]
will get to you
for the spirit of [none]
is waiting for a way to get out
the way to tell is to show this stuff
to the...
the...
the.. passage of mystery..................................................................
Author notes
hi!
do you think it is true?
Comments
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I like the dreamy, ethereal quality of this. I must admit, though, that I don't understand the ending. I especially liked the beginning: "The only thing I found in the fist of the mist is the spirit". That grabs the reader's attention right from the beginning.
Keep up the great stuff!

