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lose it


control dominates


invisible as spirits


human obsession

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prompt: control

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  • Gott ist tot
    January 13, 2008
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    Powerful piece about control. Congrats on the HM.


  • just mercedes gold member
    January 12, 2008
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    ouch. very succinct.


  • penman gold member
    January 12, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Short, but very creative. Congrats on the honorable mention.