Work for it, fight for it,
Run 'til you drop,
Trying hard not to be a flop,
Practicing, worrying,
Frustration overload,
Trying hard not to explode,
It's all about ability,
It's all about will,
It's all about what you make of it,
It's all about the thrill;
But more importantly...
It's all about control
Author notes
idk, if this will make any sense to you... to me I wrote it about jump rope, because the hardest part of jump rope is learning to control you rope movements during certain tricks, otherwise you'll mess up. But I feel that it can aply in real life, too. I mean who doesn't want to have control in their own life.
A contest entry
- Quickie: Control by Laura-Critchley.
450 points, ended January 12, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think!!!
Comments
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like it...!
Well done and I can see why it won a trophy! There is a real rhythm to this that you could skip rope to. One of your best works! Congratulations!
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ha ha
cute and well written . . good take on the prompt . . like "Work for it, fight for it" and "It's all about what you make of it" . . good ending as well . . congrats on the trophy !!
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