Sunlight..
Glistening on the surface of beaded skin
Flashes of cupped mounds laced in style so fine
Heavens gate, transfixed pupils gaze in awe of such beauty
Here, alone, but for the breeze of a summer’s day
I find myself blessed by such wonderment as the vision of you
Dancing, silently among the whistled grass ensemble
Singing sweet notes from angels harp in choir
Reclusive, I sit as still as the evening sun sets
Behind, just the faint glow of days past moments
Opening scenes from a self induced mid summer night’s dream
Casting the beauty of you as leading lady
Oh how thy mind drifts easily among the faerie wisped thoughts
Carrying both to realms afar from here
But not in a time we knew, far more than this
An eon of captivated desires thrown to the wind
Losing ourselves in the silence
Answering each others voiceless yearn
By a single glazed stare, we knew
Tonight was our night, when we became as one
And the journey has just begun………..
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 16 of 16
-
Magical
A glorious ride through sensual images dreamed in a heat of contentment...alby
-
beautiful imagery mikey,
this piece is wonderful
Tasha
-
Beautifully written. You have such a grace with words and the last line clinches it all. Awesome imagery filled in every line.
-
oh so soft
and sweet
flowing words that captured my mind
and made my heart feel
warm inside
what a lovely poem my friend
-
this is truly gorgeous. soft, tender and flowing with lovely dreamy imagery. that last line provides one of those jump up shouting yes moments.
-
-
Thank you...
It is indeed a spot where 'And the journey has just begun………..'makes sense, especially for you.
I hope your journeys through the pages here are filled with everything you look for in reading and friendship.
And having your feet in the 'good land' will surely help too. "Cead Mile Failte"
-
-
dia duit agus cead mile failte romhat!
thank you for the welcome. i have been here about two or three weeks now and have enjoyed every minute and found inspiration and much beautiful writing to enjoy. look forward to reading more of your work.
-
-
-
oh my ...
This was simply perfect in every way!
You have managed to capture my imagination and take me to where the writer is in this scenario and yet I am apart (lol! hey, it makes sense to me okay?
)
This is truly an amazing write and I enjoyed it thoroughly!
thank you for sharing
-
-
you know, when the body is busy, and the mind overactive, I forget what I wrote sometimes. But more so, the point of forgetting to leave thanks for commenting. Thanks for reading this one Chantelle, and for giving me a nod to reply to others.
Glad you enjoyed it.
-
-
I love the gentleness behind the thoughts that brought this to paper. Sensuality and day/night dreams of what ifs and whens and thens. Possibilities and realities take on one single meaning and you did write your own version of what I would steal copyright from and name "A midsummer night's dream".
thank you for entering and for sharing for just a few minutes a different realm with the reader than the one most of us will have to return to as dawn starts breaking [the mondane of daily life]. Best wishes and thanks again,
reenie
-
The visuals throught are just gorgoues, but those closing lines really took this home, ending it strong and solid. Beautifully done Mike
-
Aw. This is simply beautiful. A sensuous and beautiful write.
The gentle emotions and sweet romance just oozes through your words. It painted such a loving vision to the minds eye of the reader. Very nicely done.
Ann
-
This was such a beautiful write and leaves one swept up in the beauty of love and romance. The longing of a love for someone and then finally being together is breathtaking. You captured that feeling in these words. Amazing. This deserves the Gold. Hugs and Smiles, Always, sister Sandy
-
You find beautiful words to express such tenderness. Love, C
-
BREATH TAKING
Losing ourselves in the silence Answering each others voiceless yearn Tonight was our night, when we became as one And the journey has just begun...sighs...captivates the heart and holds me close and sweetly pulls the sighs from the soul...A journey of two lovers just begun! Nemehotatse my Hetane 
-
"not in a time we knew...and eon of captivated desire thrown to the wind."
A very romantic mind-set, my friend... the feeling of willowy feminine grace aluuringly sets the stage ...makes one hope for repeat performances? It's a lovely write, leaves one feeling sweet anticipation... ~ Klassy
Adding your comment:
1 - 16 of 16
