And as the sun
sank below
a million year-old horizon...
the magic that blessed
the world each
and every day
was no longer drenching the earth.
But it wasn't gone.
Just because the sun sets
on a golden age
does not mean that we
have lost the page -
the evening,
(or following chapter)
are always just as beautiful.
Just read into it;
look nice and deep
and soon
a most special something
for you to reap
will seep
into your world...
Sunset leads to
sunrise.
So long as
you don't
close your eyes.
Author notes
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Enjoi.
A contest entry
- ~ it is waiting in the garden.... ~ by Heart Sutra.
1500 points, ended January 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
and the ratings are...???
Comments
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Nicely done. I like the mediocrity of this piece.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
HENSLEY a.k.a VIRGOAN
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Overall it is an interesting poem. Although, the contest rules do call for left justified poetry.
This is centered. Thank you for sharing.
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Fair enough Sorry, I just hate pics not centralised, and sorta wrote this with that in mind HOWEVER.... it's all good
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this piece has a few rough spots that could be smoothed over, but all in all, has a nice, positive outlook i can appreciate
thanks for entering
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