When my heart bleeds in despair
When my mind streams in pain or sorrow
When my soul sails on rough waters
When my body ties up with dependent shackles
I wait for a tone, even in low voice
to say some soothing words to comfort me
If it is exactly a sweet smile
flowering from a beloved heart
I feel great and excited at that point of time
thinking as if, the cozy spring, has given a ring tone to my earsfull
I really get enthused as if there is a fall of shower
duly inundating me, in streams of delight
Author notes
inundating me, in streams of delight
A contest entry
- Smile? by Exodus.
525 points, ended January 18, 2008, 23 entries
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I don't think you've quite captured here what I mean by the contest, but it is a very good attempt and a beautiful poem. Thank you
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