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A New World Awaits

I started writing on, July 4th 2007,
on a network, I had stumbled upon.
One of my friends, kept telling me about AP,
but due to my being, technically challenged.
I pondered, I didn't want to leave the people,
that had became a part, of my life there.
Finally, on Oct. 13th, I decided,
to meet the ultimate challenge and venture out.
I must sheepishly admit, it was overwhelming at first,
but she helped me out, in so many different ways.
At first I really, thought, something was wrong with me,
for only a mere few, were reading my poems.
After being told, the secret here, was commenting,
it was no time, before I had trouble, keeping up with the waves.
This community is so friendly, wonderful and helpful,
in fact so much, that I brought my friends over, from the other site.
The family feeling here is astounding, for I have always been a loner,
but not any longer, for I am blessed. with so many friends and family
To be given the opportunity  to write, with such skilled poets, humbles me,
and the only thing I don't like about it, is when I can't get on it.


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  • z etoile
    January 14, 2008
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    Awesome I love you story!


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    joining AP is a wonderful way to write and have others comment on your work. I thank you for joining my contest. Riftkin


  • Patpowers silver member
    January 13, 2008

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    Thanks for joining and sharing your poems. Glad to hear you gave us the reason! THANKS for writing a poem like this one!!


  • TheClimb
    January 12, 2008

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    I don't like to think about that last part either, it makes me depressed seriously. This is a beautiful background that you're using I love it 'n it enhances your poem.

    AP is where our lives truly began and we were allowed to be ourselves...


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    January 12, 2008

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    I knew world does indeed wait....I was glad to have finally come to AP to
    This is a great write Darl, tells it all in a brilliant way


    Cin


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 12, 2008
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    Excellent

    Most definatly and once I couldnt get in and I truly flipped but isnt it grand


  • SweetNessaLynn
    January 12, 2008

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    I am glad you decided to join my friend. Great write. Much love always.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    I joined because I was told of this site by Mark
    I to was nervous, but soon I felt a lot more confident and now here I am 7 months on.
    What I feel I write about with no regret and in return I have met some of the most wonderful people, who I love with all my heart.
    I do love your words here Jan
    You are a gem and one special and true friend
    * xx


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 12, 2008

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    HEHE Dang Ap sometimes LOL Other than the technical difficulties it's Great. Nice write good luck with it in the contest.HEHE That's my Grandpas Birth day lol


  • quack silver member
    January 12, 2008
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    i like the last bit it made me laugh
    i love you mum

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