Once, out of the clear window I saw through
Life that strolls and passes by, with innocent eyes
A wave or smile at the guest, a friend I haven’t met
That stranger I came to know as You
You, the person who took me from behind my shield
That protected me from all harm and corruption
You, who told me that I would be safe from all enemies,
I never knew I had but one enemy: You
Never did I expect a blow so hard from your hands it flew
Stabbing me, stabbing me right into my heart
The pain! Oh, it was terrible, excruciating, unbearable
Most painful because it came from you
Your fucking carnage was meant to kill
It wounded me right in my heart, where life flowed
Yet I died not, bled not
A beast or warlock, what the hell are you?
You, so kind, and all other the sweet words I knew
But lurking inside, a monstrous beast!
Who taught me all I needed to know
About life malicious, all that was You
Now, You might know not how I feel
Heart of virtue murdered, mind of vengeance replaced
Searching for its prey, its very first prey
To drink its blood, the blood of You
Author notes
(penned in 2000)
In a list
A contest entry
- Darkwrite Challenge ~Round 1~ by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
425 points, ended January 27, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gold Anyone? by loveisthemoment.
600 points, ended February 1, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Broken Love (The Deeper the Love Goes, the Deeper the Knife Stabs) by DarkLotus4Life..
300 points, ended February 9, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - vows,marriage,divorce,seperated..till death did you part..pw,s ok.. by Honeydew.
450 points, ended March 9, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wowo
pretty strong poetry writing here...a very good write...lots of emotion...thank you for entering my contest.
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I really like this write, it's deep and I could feel the emotiona
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Loved it
This poem does not speak to me it screams at me! While reading I felt an intese rage building as if u were yelling the lines at me. -
Searching for its prey, its very first prey
To drink its blood, the blood of You
loved these lines...great job
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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