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I am human

"human human human!" I cry I scream
Why can't you remember?
I am human I am alive I am here.
Please...
I am not innocent, because of you...
You forgot me.
Now all I want is innocence,
because you stripped me of my
feelings and my emotions.
When I see you I only feel you,
and you are pure hate.
I hope one day, father,
that you will remember me.
Please?

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    This is such a great write. I was drawn in from the title and the poem that followed this is wonderful. And the ending is really good, "father", well done, great write.