He enters in the dark
The cold pressing into his body
He has been watching
Seeking out the family through the rain
The puppet master begins
The marionettes begin their act
Scene one, the opening slaughter
The porcelain faces of dolls lined up for the show
The children all asleep in their beds
Dreaming their last dreams
Unknowing their fates
Their sweet faces now covered in red disgust
The white carpet matches the walls now
The scent of rust & gunpowder linger in the air
And now scene two, the misses
While the eyes of his dolls are alive by candle light
He's breathing quiet & smooth now
While she's gasping for air
At the touch of his powdered hands
And he whispers his name as he transforms her
And so begins act three, clean up
He wipes her clean, smiling at her beauty
He had longed to touch her
To breathe in her scent
And the faces of his puppets smile
They watch him work & transform
Once a man & now the Dragon
The color of the walls match the color of his eyes
Act four, games
As he positions his newest characters
He begins to renew
His mind becoming unreachable
Closing act, silence
She was his lamb, he was her slaughter
As she sits on the cold table
She'll have eternity to remember her final moments
Silence
Silence
Silence
And she was his lamb...
Author notes
If you can guess what my prompt was, I'll give you 200 points.
-Jess
Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?
Comments
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dope shit
I liked this a lot.
Fantastic imagery and appropriate extended metaphor.
The repetition of [silence] in the last stanza was good, but 2 might be enough, I'm not sure. Hmm.. Yes, very nice write indeed. I look forward to reading more from you.
Respect. -
umm..red dragon the movie, and or the silence of the lambs series?


