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Road to Heaven





when the word said, shook hands with strength, a vast gratitude
dismissed alone with panegyric, erased leaves of  sky's flower
like a loose exclamation, noticing the measure of verse,
thought in insomnia, don't let muse of wide eyes , tickling asking for nails,
scratching myself with soul.

did not choose soon, in beginning, took care otherwise,
so wrapped in sheet, negotiated of poetizing,
going to compete with monks of monastery before revealed,
then in fashion, would say in verse my sadness, like a sweat in cloister
decorated, repeating, frankly finding AP platform, could be a virtue,
reading poetry, poet's religion, falling to metaphor of warmness of skies.

waited for test, confusing, conceiving laid now on right path,
let myself be back, with eyes in ceiling, imagining more ever at all,
learned the most wizard wisdom concluding with golden key,
verses in sense, in form. modifying chronologically from previous ones,
bring praised perfection, fused before the lock.

determined myself to join, lose the life, gain the battle
without vanity, crafting how a magnificent verse be carved,
resonant, no doubt.victory gained at thoughts advantage nobly,
a novelty possible in a mysterious road passing through heaven.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





 

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  • Riftkin gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    joining AP is a wonderful way to write and have others comment on your work. I thank you for joining my contest. Riftkin