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HM -Joyful Clouds - BG Ded. Desire

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HM -Joyful Clouds - BG Ded. Desire Jan 12 1:03 AM. 2008
Storm clouds dance, upon autumn winds. Grumbling with glee, before the rain begins. Static electricity, builds within their girth. Tickling joyfully away, till laughter makes them spark. Now gasping for air, from laughing so hard. Humidity begins to accumulate and spill out from their eyes. Therefore bathing the ground, with tears of bliss. Sharing their happiness, to all across the land. © Cara L. Greenlee, All rights reserved Prompt: It Rained today tell me about it.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 12

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    This is so deep and wonderful
    Laughter captured within the rain
    well done babes for another masterpiece
    Hugs Mum xx
  • judmc
    January 12
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    A hymm in the worship of nature, good imagery and imagination. good luck!
  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    January 12

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    this is such a beautiful write which is full of imagery and flows so beautifully. i love the depth within it. well done and best of luck


  • ShelleyA gold member
    January 12

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    A lovely write. Very good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice metaphor. Vivid descriptives. Nice personification of clouds. Good word choice. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.

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