What could I possibly have done,
to deserve being treated like this?
What could I possibly have said,
to deserve being tortured like this?
Why doesn't anyone trust me,
with anything anymore?
What did I do,
to make you this way?
I hate feeling this way,
unwanted unneeded untrusted.
It's like no matter what I say,
nobody really listens anymore.
I just want to get it over with,
grow up and be on my own.
I can't believe I got myself into this,
it's just such a huge mess.
What could I possibly do,
to make you trust me again.
I don't deserve this,
any of it.
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Comments
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A very defensive piece of poetry. Seems as though you have a shield of guilt goes up pretty often. When you do something wrong or not. You need more confidence in yourself.
Kelli
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jin is pretty much right!
but as for the poem its self.
i think it was a strong write.
and it came from the heart those are the best i read
amazing work yet again. -
I have read several of your poems now and I see you writing about many feelings I had as a teenager. Trust me, thinge will get better.
You are a very good writer. You have the heart of a poet.
Love,
Amera♥
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There's nothing you can do, dear girl. Once trust is broken, the victim of your transgression must learn to forgive you. If you've been falsely accused, which is evidently how you feel, the truth will always come out, sooner, or later.
Trust is a gift. We give our trust to those we love, and when it's violated, well..
it's gone. I was made to feel guilty for years, in my marriage, after some pretty devious deceptions...years! I was guilty, completely. But, how many times can you say you're sorry?
Let me help you edit this later, this is a great piece.
I wish you peace today, dear girl.
Enough said,
Jin
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