I dream about holding your hand,
and gazing into your eyes.
I dream about laying my head on your chest,
and listening to your steady heartbeat.
I dream about you holding me tight,
and all my worries melting away.
I dream about being seen with you,
and people being envious of our love.
I dream about watching the sunset with you,
and keeping you warm in the cool evening air.
I dream about walking on the beach with you,
fingers laced with hands hanging at our sides.
I dream about shopping with you,
and you telling me how beautiful I look.
I dream about wedding planning with you,
and making every little decision together.
This is what I dream about,
every night when I close my eyes.
I know this is true love,
because reality is better than any dream.
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A contest entry
- Pre-write Quickie- Hurry by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended January 18, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 100 poems, more points to come! by katie-jo.
900 points, ended January 18, 2008, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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We ofttimes dream of the one we want to be with the most. I liked this piece. Good luck to you in the contest.
Kelli
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i loved the Imagery
i got out of this poem
very nice work sweetie
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This is amazing, I could really feel your emotions screaming off my screen.
Thank you for entering and all the best in the contest.
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Sorry, but this entry does not qualify for the contes. The only rule in this contest states that each entry must be fifteen lines or less and this is over that limit. Thank you for entering though. Storm
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Oh sweetheart! This is breathtaking. You have a heart! You have lovely words..they show me joy, and hope, and sweet, sweet innocence...ahhh, how very lovely to gaze into the very core of youth..just wonderful.
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