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[ she hurts inside ]

she hurts inside
you'd never guess with the smile she wears
she hurts inside
it's not like anyone really cares....
she hurts inside
god only knows why
her prayers are full of sorrow and despair
with a cuss word here and there

she hurts inside
theres nothing anyone can do
she hurts inside
this isn't something new

please just take away the pain
is all she will ask
please just take away the pain
I don't want to live behind this mask

please just take away the pain
I'm tired of crying
i'm sick of lying
I feel like dying
please just take away the pain

Doesn't anyone understand?
how much pain I feel
Doesn't anyone understand?
that this feeling is so real

Doesn't anyone understand?
so many people lied
so many times she's cried
she just wants to hide

she doesn't have anything to smile for
not anymore
she puts her life on a shelf
stuffed in a drawer
maybe now she should just kill herself

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    Oh this is so very sad
    I know how this feels like, it sucks...
    And it feels horrible doesn't it??

    I felt a connection to it straight off....

    My favourite stanza:

    "she doesn't have anything to smile for
    not anymore
    she puts her life on a shelf
    stuffed in a drawer
    maybe now she should just kill herself"

    Very strong and emotional write though.

    Claire xx