A whisper through the night air
The soft aroma of lavender settling in
The beauty all around me
That answers all my plea's
It brings me only slight closure
Closure of a broken Heart
Of a lost love
Even though there's beauty
I still feel like I'm looking at it
Through Opaque glass
Still
I feel pleasure
Even if it is Oblique
I Sit here in my Leisure time
On a mystic night
Where all the stars in the sky
look like little crystals sparkling in the light
It's true today
I mourned my loss
Because it was so abrupt
But I know I must
Resume my life
And relish in the freedom I got
With a flutter of belief
No matter how delicate I seem
Maybe like a rose
I can roar in fury
and soar up higher than anyone else
Because I know I can move on!
Oh, I can move one...
Author notes
Ok, I chose option #3 The word bank, and I have a long list of words so I'll get to it. I used: rose opaque closure pleasure plea oblique lavender love leisure
beauty crystal mystic mourn abrupt whisper aroma roar relish resume soar delicate flutter believe... I think that's all that I used. Well, I hope you like, and Also, Happy Birthday to you x Empathic Rose x I hope you have a great birthday!
A contest entry
- It's My Birthday! Help Me Celebrate!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
1050 points, ended January 28, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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Wonderful! I commend you for managing to include so many of the words from the word bank. This was a beautiful read, quite amazing. It almost had a choral effect to it. Could be sung even, like morning birds...
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