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Soar Or Mourn

A rose
A simple pleasure
An acute plea to a heart's desire
While Lavender's aroma catches the whisper of calm beauty
benign and delicate like the fairie's mystic flutter

Can cause you to believe and soar
Or
Can cause you to doubt and mourn
It's your choice
Wether its a gentle voice or a simple quiet plea of the heart

A contest entry

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  • moonling
    February 11, 2008
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    Short but sweet and beautiful imagery as always, stone wolf.


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 25, 2008

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    Beautiful. So expressive. I thank you for making an effort to enter my contest, it means a lot to me.
    'lavenders aroma'. Love that phrase


  • leander Moderators member
    January 12, 2008

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    This is quite a short poem that you have written here, but I like it The imagery you have and the fact you spoke to my senses with this one is really great!
    Best of luck in the contest!
    Leander


  • Providence
    January 12, 2008

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    Oh Bravo dear poet. It is indeed always our choice. We can hold in to heartbreak and sorrow our celebrate joy and Love.

    Great write!

    Marianne

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