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The Nightclub Game.

You saw her walk in the club
between the smoky liimelight you noticed...
Her ass either filled out her jeans
Or her breast bounced nicely to the beat..
You asked for her number
she asked you why
apparently, you said, "I was feeling your vibe"
You dont know her from bacon, and yet you want those ten digits
you somehow think shes in your league
shes smiling, but PLEASE would you walk away
so she can stop faking it
Your game is weak
Your clothes and cologne are tired
you came to the bar for romance,
and all you are going to get is my tab
so why are you still trying?
You are still lingering like you are hurt
calm down, perhaps you did not know
my vagina is not on auction
you turn to girl two
I walk away and try to forget you

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  • sourpatchpanda
    January 15, 2008
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    Hell nah! This actually made me giggle a bit. I can only imagine the look on the guys face who would experience something like this... I liked how it didn't rhyme in every place, but the way it did rhyme worked beautifully. It was definitely visually pleasing and I could see the scene happen in my head.