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Encore




 

With no regret
and no hesitation,

hips rose in response
to carnal tongue's growl,

urging fingers,
to play
in the seduction

of your voice.


Tension grew,

teasing sensitivity
to new heights,


erasing inhibitions
with primal satiation.


Laying in the afterglow,
whispered wishes broke silence


with sighs,

as eyes fell victim
to sandman's dreamscape
in anticipation

of tomorrow's call.


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  • SpiritMother
    February 29, 2008

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    Quite sensual and enticing yet leaving something for the imagination to explore..as always you bring love with pleasure to everything you write.


  • leander Moderators member
    February 21, 2008

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    As you know, I'm not the best sensual writer out there - in fact, I probably stand somewhere at the bottom of the ladder when it comes to that style. Erotica doesn't say a thing to me at all, but this one... it's written with such a soothing voice, as if it was a soft hand, caressing my sheeks

    Love this one!
    Leander


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    February 8, 2008

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    Woah from the first stanza I was sucked in, awesome stuff. Very tasteful I might add.
    Love ya mum,
    Lil


  • HeavenonEarth
    February 1, 2008

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    Damn phone sex!
    I'm over here chuckling, I'm delirious and think I need some sleep. It's not hitting me the way it should, I know it's due to lack of sleep.
    Time for my sandman's dreamscape
    The more I dig into your poetry I know why I haven't heard from you.

    It's beautiful babe
    Love ya!
    ~Joy


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 27, 2008

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    Oh crap! The first stanza of this one just sucked me right in. This is one heated piece It has all the sensuality that you can stand without bursting and done with class and marvellous imagery! Whew! It is hot here!


  • Delicate Fire Water
    January 23, 2008

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    You're such a dark horse Aunty Bel Love this write, keep it up! Talk to you soon!

    ~Stephi-Dawne~


  • new light
    January 12, 2008

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    wow.

    i love all of the imagery you put into this piece.
    this is beautiful and amazing


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 12, 2008

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    Awesome writing, Bel!
    So wonderfully sensual and erotic; I love it!
    You still have wonderful talents, my friend!


  • Swan song gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    Now this is spicy. Wow! I can't find a line I like the most. I like them all here is an extra funny bunny for you

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