It seems to me that you were afraid
To hold my hand and smile that day
We held each others dreams so high
And sang a secret lullaby
I remember well that rainy day
When all our worries washed away
A feeling and a memory
Was all that I could barely see
I wish that I could (be) again
I wish that we were more than friends
A certain time
A special place
In between
This melody
I remember well that rainy day
When all our worries washed away
A feeling and a memory
Was all that I could barely see
Hmm
Hm
Author notes
I wrote this as a poem awhile back and forgot about these few words on paper a very long yellow dog eared page time ago. It was an inspiration of my first crush on a girl way out of my league. The world seemed a magical place back then -to me- but then I was only in 4th grade. I later converted the words to some music I had written somewhere around my Practice room.
I added some stuff here...remembered a few things and added some stuff there...and touche' a song played in the 3rd kapo position in remembrance to my 4Th grade world and favorite book in that time...Watership Down.
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It's a great poem unfortunately I can't play the video...something must be wrong with my computer. Either way great write, and thanks for entering.
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This is the first video poem that I've watched and I'm very, very impressed. I wish I could write and play the guitar like that (or at all, heh). This is a job well done and I'm glad that I stopped to check it out. Thanks for sharing this!
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That was really really good, lyrics, music, everything! Well done. -
I'm usually not a fan of listening to guys and their guitars online, but I liked this one ^^ I like Spanish guitars and broken chords like what you played when you weren't singing and 'twas lovely.
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