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Fanny's Bloomers (version 2)

Fanny hung her clothes out
on a bright and sunny day,
she had hung her laundry out to dry
but her bloomers blew away.

There came along a storm
a wind that blew real hard,
Fanny grabbed her laundry
and dragged it through the yard.

Her laundry basket had blown away
along with panties and another blouse,
she grabbed all that she could
and ran inside her house.

Fanny lost her favorite bloomers
it was a bad and stormy day,
she had run inside upset about her loss
as the wind blew some branches away.

Fanny called for Betty Sue
she needed a friend and a smile,
she told her about her bloomers
and was cheered up after a while.

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Option 4, a rhyming poem

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  • neoladyem
    January 13, 2008

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    This is so funny. I never read a funnier poem. LOL!!! Great job on rhyming. To bad about the bloomers though.