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Life's Little Quote

Life is too complicated to easily understand
The meaning and the reasons that make it so bland
The scars and the cuts only add to the image
That's broken and torn by every percentage
We all seem to smile in some kind of way
But the ways that their faked makes it not okay

Whats your thoughts?

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  • Ken-Maverick
    July 31, 2008
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    Well said my friend


  • ckwriter69
    January 13, 2008

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    Very true, their is nothing worse then a fake smile. You can always tell the difference in the person by the look in their eyes, by the smirk, by the laughter. Good to see you writing again its been awhile. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


  • ForeverLastingComa
    January 12, 2008
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    i like this poem a whole lot it totally xplains alot..nice write..keep up the gud work =)


  • simplystic
    January 11, 2008
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    wow. Awesome. i love the rhyme scheme and i can completely relate to that feeling of life.