Cut a line through my vein
Please tell me why you play these games
Slit my veins until you choke
I hope you die, I hope you croak
Sit me down to compromise
Don't tell me the truth, tell me lies
Do you hurt?
Do you feel?
Can you help me make this real?
Sing me a song
Lay me to sleep
Help me rise over this heap
Cut my wrists
Blacken my eyes
Leave my body
Let me die
Let god take me in
Heal my heart
For what you've done
there's no new start.
Author notes
this is lame.
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Thit is not lame!
Thats a really strong ending, i love it .Maybe you should try something new ,just in case, like making all of your sets of words have four lines.This poem motivated me to write a version of (my idea of )the last four lines ,i think ill go check if youve got more.
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