Oh it was April of 2005
my world was falling apart
Before my eyes....
looked like I was losing my job..
all I had worked for
just wasting away
Like it didn't matter
and no one cared
That April month
of 2005
was by far
the hardest month
in my life
The crying didn't stop
uncontrollable tears
I had a harrasser
and she was not letting go
Further down the hole
she buried
The more upset I was
the harder she went
Grasping on the a computer
google I searched
looking for a place
where I could write
and share everything
get these burdens off my chest
so everyday
I read poems
wrote poems
joined prayer groups
prayed
laughed
talked
and oh the writing
buried from highschool days
the need to write resurfaced
so out came the words
and helped ease the pain
little by little
I was surrounded by love
prayers
and people just like me
I am glad to tell the story
for all of you....
cause each of you that comments
talks to me
prays with me
You are lights to me
in a tunnel that was so dark
and now it shines
with all your love
THANK YOU AP FRIENDS....
I love you so!
A contest entry
- Why Did You Join? by Riftkin.
600 points, ended January 14, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This doesn't have fancy words.. just thank you so much!
Comments
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Nice
I'm glad you overcame the adversity. "What doesn't kill you will make you stronger." You are a survivor. Go forth and do great things. -
What a wonderful poem of appreciation & growth!
Thank you, dear, for calling this one to my attention. I am only a Johnie come lately in your AP history here-- but I have also found you to be a blessing to me during my far more abbreviated stay here. I know live for both of us is still not a bed of roses (unless we take into account the thorns)--but we and many others are mutually blessed having a place to express ourselves and show concern and compassion for others. So I agree with you and say a thanks to you and Many others too, for helping make AP all the good it is and can be.
Bless You,
David
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Awwww...this is such a sweet dedication to those that have obvisouly helped you and touched you in a way that has left an impression on your heart and soul. I am so glad that I was able to be someone that left such a comment on your poem that you remembered me. I hope that things you have improved for you, and remember, I am always here if you ever need someone to talk to sweetie. Thanks for an excellent read.
Midnight
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May we all be as fortunate to be received as well. I found my way by accident, and it is such a fun start. I love reading poetry and writing of course. I hope to now do more writing. Been stale for quite a while now. Thank you for reading my work and adding me as a favorite, I would like to return the privilage.
Kelli
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What a beautiful but sad poem. I loved it. Your words are inspiring. Your verse was grea, nice penn, as usual!
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joining AP is a wonderful way to write and have others comment on your work. I thank you for joining my contest. Riftkin
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This is cool. When I first joined I was living in another State(US), and had a diferent wife. AP has definetly help me through some stuff. Now I stop by briefly to see if anything new is happening. I'm going to have to start posting again...
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I hope things are going better now.
Great write!
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I'm pretty happy with reads or comments myself.
Yes I remember you. You would comment from time to time on some of my poems that caught your interest. They're probably still there.
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O this is beautiful. it touched my heart. I think that this write is awesome. It is so good to have friends who love you.I think everybody needs somebody.You are a precious friend and Sis. This write is gracious and purely from the heart. thank yo for this upliftinfg write. You are a great person and may God be with you. You know Im here for you when you need me.
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Powerfully Moving!
WOW
This is the 2nd mountain moving poem I have read in this contest today
I truly love the layout of this piece.This part here,"You are lights to me
in a tunnel that was so dark
and now it shines
with all your love
THANK YOU AP FRIENDS....
I love you so! ", is trophy worthy in itself
Thank you for sharing such a "sad turned beautiful"
piece with us and best of luck in the contest!
DT
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Many of us came seeking so many things...shelter, a place to house our words, friendly voices from beyond the computer screen, a hideout, dreams, hopes, and aspirations. Almost three years since you found this safe-haven. Glad you're here poet and glad I know you. I hope your relationship with AP lasts as long as you wish. We can all grow together here in loving-kindness and have fun honing our skills. Great work! The best to you in the challenge.
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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nice write Great job. Awesome feeling and nice flow. It is a honor to be your AP friend
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It is my pleasure to be your AP friend! I am glad to know you and be able to read your pieces, as I enjoy having you read mine! I love you!
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Oh, this is so tender. It is very beautiful and aspiring as well. I like the flow. It is really extremely gorgeous. A good life never goes to waste. It may not be now but then, life will resurface
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This is a wonderful, beautiful write Dear GD. Not much more can be said abocve and beyond that except to say thank you for sahring with us thiose thoughts on those times,
Kudos,
Evan
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What a pleasant message
I am glad you found uplifting time in your life. aGreat how so many and so few but special can ease the burdens in our life. So many behind us cheering us on and specoal ones to help pull us through. Each hand in hand making a difference in our life. Like little toy soldiers all in a row,...mac
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A piece written from the heart for sure. I am glad you joined and shared your work here, especially your prayers. I wish you well in the contest.
Sam
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This is very heartfelt and loving.There are so many reasons.You have penned them well.
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a place to vent, to laugh and pray together. you have covered most reasons people join, other than a love of poetry and writing, mostly the NEED to write it down. thank you for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always
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