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While you're here
Time will stand still
And tomorrow is nothing

The sands of time will never stray into night
Forever we'll stand on the
edge of dawn
And fall off the ledge of twilight

If a day is all I will ever have
I'll hold it close
And cease it from ending,
I want to relive it forever.

So come with me
And I'll hold you close
As we travel back
Through destiny.

I'll take your hand
And we'll walk away
Into the fading light
Of yesterday.

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  • Endiku Lei Kikona
    September 4, 2008
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    This poem has to be one of the most beautiful things I've ever read in my life Mana


  • AmazinJason
    January 12, 2008
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    This is pretty cool.