she's got that air of mystery
she's dark,
she's light
hiding behind that thick hair
playing the game
bounces up, eyebrows raised
tricks on your mind,
she laughs at you
you're buckled in now, there's no stopping
keep your hands and feet in at all times
gravity takes over and your heart drops
she's got you
she's light, she's dark,
and everything in between
she's got that air of mystery
Author notes
http://chipil.deviantart.com/art/Good-times-24141737
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest (January) by Denierim.
1000 points, ended February 3, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love this. Such a short story that reads in many different ways. But what I saw from this poem was falling in love with someone, just in a blink of an eye. Luring a person to love you in a simple moment shorter than life. I like the story behind this and it really got my inspiration flowing now... I'm not sure if that's a good or bad thing, concidered I have a ton of things to do without any time to start thinking... lol
Wonderful work with this one!
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