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Kitten

I am perfectly capable of sliting your throat
A perched house cat I may seem capable of being
a tamely housewife whilst you wolf down your food

I cook and clean for you and even let you fuck me
in the most hurtful of places you use me as a cover
I am the one who was once a free lioness now tangled

In this entrapment of tonight I will let you fuck me rough
and hard like I am some cheap hooker you could
get on the street, I in turn with a slit to the throat for being

just you, a pathetic man at my beckon call
Some call me the murderess some call my ways ingenious
I am none but the sex kitten from next door who tempts

you to tease and pretends to be domesticated
Watch out, kitten turn into lionesses who rip
your head off

A contest entry

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  • Papagallo
    January 18, 2008
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    i meant woman scorned. I am a poor typist.

  • Papagallo
    January 18, 2008

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    Scary

    Yes beware of a oman scorned. I would certainly love you gentle and with the love a woman deserves. Men can be most pathetic and such a man needs justuce


    • Alexis Manley
      January 18, 2008
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      I was putting out that most women put up with such behavior, i simply state that i refuse to lol


  • Digital-coma
    January 17, 2008

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    WOW!

    AMAZING, ABSOLUTELY STUNNINGLY BREATH-TAKING!!!!
    Great job on the gold,
    *applauds*
    i love EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS (haha, especially the cause of death). KUDOS


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    Revenge of the kitty! I will never look at my cats the same way again! Very well written, creative and unique. Best of luck with it in the contest


  • Candy6
    January 12, 2008

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    cute

    I love reading about the kitties poems. Kittens are so cute, and when they grow up they're still cute.

  • Kumgang
    January 11, 2008
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    good I liked it and it is what I asked for

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