I remember the day so clearly
my heart was broken in two
allpoetry opened a door for me
to express what noone could hear
I love the freedom that comes with it
the chance to meet new people
the release that comes from writing
i'll never forget the day i joined
i was twisted and tormented inside
i found a new family of friends
a place where i could be me
there is nothing to dislike about allpoetry
except i cant stay in the world of words
tomorrow will be another day
i can enter this wonderful world
to be greeted by my newfound friends
to find out who i am again
A contest entry
- Why Did You Join? by Riftkin.
600 points, ended January 14, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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joining AP is a wonderful way to write and have others comment on your work. I thank you for joining my contest. Riftkin
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very moving
This is a very moving poem you have penned here
This was my favorite part:tomorrow will be another day
i can enter this wonderful world
to be greeted by my newfound friends
to find out who i am again
Thank you for sharing this with us and best of luck in the contest.
DT
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