When my mind is swimming with blank thoughts
in the river streams of silence
and When my nasal cavities are unable to grab fragrance
from the beautifully grown flowers of my frontal garden
When the sheen of the stars in the azure sky
is not giving much needed comfort in liaison with my soul
I opted for a heart that allows me to sail independently
with my own ideas and aspirations flashing from an inner soul
A site in my immediate sight, as a gift of GOD, appeared before me in my web search
and since long it is sumptuously catering to the needs of my sane soul with its serene touch
Author notes
hail the site that cools our sight
A contest entry
- Why Did You Join? by Riftkin.
600 points, ended January 14, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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joining AP is a wonderful way to write and have others comment on your work. I thank you for joining my contest. Riftkin
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This sums up why you joined AP quite well
I liked this part best:I opted for a heart that allows me to sail independently
with my own ideas and aspirations flashing from an inner soul
This just has a majestic flow to the ears when read aloud
Thank you for sharing this with us and best of luck in the contest.
DT
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thank you for the feelings, alike, in fraternity
purush
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