Looking for a vent,
I found all poetry.
Trying to find a place,
Away from reality.
I turned through google’s pages,
I even asked old Jeeves.
Until I found this website,
Without the million fees.
People here seemed friendly,
In this place which I could Wright.
Contests, free writes, plenty,
AllPoetry is my site!
A contest entry
- Why Did You Join? by Riftkin.
600 points, ended January 14, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any lines your hated.. maybe liked??
Comments
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joining AP is a wonderful way to write and have others comment on your work. I thank you for joining my contest. Riftkin
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This is a pretty cool poem you have shared with us
I liked the 2nd stanza best, its rhyme and flow are flawless
Take care and best of luck to you in the contest.
DT
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Very good
Veryy good and to the point, and well thought out.
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