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Twisted Tales

Young Cinderella loved the Prince,

But did the Prince feel passion,

There was never a chance,

He didn't do romance,

When kissed he went visibly ashen,

 

Rapunzel's hair was terribly long,

With the length the Prince was enthralled,

He loved her hair,

But for her he didn't care,

So off she went and shaved her head bald,

 

Little Red Riding Hood went to see gran,

But the wolf had beaten her there,

He ate all grannies food,

But none of it was chewed,

And he choked at the foot of the stair.

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by frieslandreject. (Liz Kerry). Derbyshire, England.
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  • crimsondew
    January 16, 2008
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    lol...good one...

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    This is great it made me smile it is more then good thanks for sharing this with me goodluck in her contest much love


    • mystic-angel
      January 14, 2008
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      Thank you, I'm pleased I can bring a smile to you.
      Blessings.xx


  • Melodies
    January 13, 2008

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    OH MY YES! I smiled like this >>>> all the way through and at the end I laughed! I love what happened to the wolf, especially! Oh, the disagreeable princes are so true to life, and quite so. BRAVO!


  • new light
    January 12, 2008
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    i like this a lot.
    it gave me a chuckle

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