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Twice Rhymed

Don't bite the hand
Connected to your arm
The pain may be intense
You'll jump up in alarm!

Don't bite the foot
Connected to your leg
Hopping all about
That choice you will renege.

Don't bite your lip
Or silly rhymes may slip
See? how these have sproung
I should have bit my tongue!

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  • Topnotchsy
    August 15, 2008

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    Haha, funny write here. Nice rhyming And the rhythm and idea are a lot of fun.


  • daviscth silver member
    January 13, 2008

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    I enjoyed this very much and am glad you had fun. I do some of them myself. So I know what you mean. I hope you will post in my next one, Cathy