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Queen Of Lustful Passion

I am the Queen of passion surreal
Ready to take a walk on the wildside
Aroused in my panting raging fire
To satiate my succlent breast of heated desire

My lustful secret thoughts is you
Ready to rip into every fiber of your being
Delve powerfully electryfying your soul
And spark a fire of full control

Drowning you in my erotic flesh
And sexually capture your heart forever

Author notes

Painting entitled "Dena" by Lorenzo Sperlonga.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    December 6, 2008

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    Ah..pleased to know the secrets you shared and pleased to know the truth you revealed..love this journey of your penning..thanks for sharing..

  • Heavens Child
    April 25, 2008

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    I read the title and couldn't resist clicking. A poem of lustful passion indeed. Very well composed, dramatic but not over the top.

  • deedee37
    April 19, 2008

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    I like this poem. It is very well written. My poems like this always turn out pornographic or not sexualy at all.

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  • sexNcandy
    April 19, 2008
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    i like it... nice.

  • joeybueno gold member
    April 9, 2008
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    You did a great job of describing sexual feelings without being explicit. Love it


  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    March 27, 2008

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    Very passion filled, full of painted desire. Your choice in words are wonderful. I enjoyed reading this, well done.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Rotanman
    March 27, 2008

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    EXCELLENT!

    EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT! LIKE A BOLT OF PASSION...DRIVING DOWN THAT FREEWAY OF LOVE! BETTER HAVE AN AIR BAG AND WEAR SEATBELT! IT WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN. INSPIRATION IS QUITE A DRUG! THE MUSE...THE MUSE IS THE FUSE!

  • lostangel07
    March 26, 2008

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    A beautiful sensual piece, however, watch your spelling and grammar. It can detract from a piece. I think you have a lot of talent and poetic wisdom. Good job.

    . Rewarded 4


  • ScarletO gold member
    January 18, 2008
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    Passion written on the wild side. Very well written!


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 18, 2008

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    Now that is desire. I think you've surely seen into this woman's passionate side. Your words go nicely with the picture. Well done here. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm

  • leander Moderators member
    January 12, 2008
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    You've written a very original, sensual poem here I like how you managed to work your way arround all the cliches there are to be found in sensual poetry so a very good job on this!

    I think I found one little oopsie though in the last line of your first stanza: succlens -> succulent?

    anyway, I with you the best of luck in this contest!
    Leander
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