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bloodlust

this need i once felt is more like lust
insatiable
and the pathetic shadow of something meaningful
like infatuation against love

at the time i thought it meant something strong, like "hate"
but it turned out more like "apathy"
just like those damn agnostics, taking the easy way out

the worst part is that
cutting
is so much less satisfying than sex

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hehehe.

A contest entry

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  • leander Moderators member
    January 17, 2008

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    lol the last part actually got me giggling, and think that those words would come from a potty-mouth kind of person

    Powerful poem, though I didn't really 'feel' it as I can't really relate to this

    Leander