this need i once felt is more like lust
insatiable
and the pathetic shadow of something meaningful
like infatuation against love
at the time i thought it meant something strong, like "hate"
but it turned out more like "apathy"
just like those damn agnostics, taking the easy way out
the worst part is that
cutting
is so much less satisfying than sex
Author notes
hehehe.
A contest entry
- 2007 - everything under 25 lines by leander.
1000 points, ended January 17, 2008, 167 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
how can i make this FRICKING RROOOOOOOOCK
Comments
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lol
the last part actually got me giggling, and think that those words would come from a potty-mouth kind of person 
Powerful poem, though I didn't really 'feel' it as I can't really relate to this
Leander

