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those bloody songs

they prey on my concience
reminding me of what i've done
and im not proud of it
so i find myself crying along.

"never gonna give you up"
i already did, it sucks.
my concience hurts too much,
why can't they leave me alone?

i'm not in the mood right now
to be tossed around.
i don't feel like music
so i'll turn it off and sigh.

"why won't you give me your love"
theres just one problem cos
i told you, i wanted to
but i just cannot be.

finally something good comes on
something i can relate to
it makes me feel a ton better
so i can bear this noise

"take it away, and everything'll be okay"
i took you away
and trust me
everything is double gay.

why don't i give up now
and let you back in
i don't know why i left you,
at least thats what i say.

"don't think of me"
i'll only let you down
i don't even know what to do
thats why i'm so lame.

i thought that god told me
to leave you that night,
but now i think i'm going mad
i won't leave without a fight.

i hear these songs
speaking of betrayal
didn't i betray your trust?
but seriously
i have to get it off my chest,
it wasnt my fault.
and seriously
i have to let you know,
that i still want to talk.
yes seriously
i sound like that,
when they still wanna be friends.
but honestly
i tell you with my heart,
i can't bear to lose you.

nathy. please forgive me, if it's the last thing you do. please speak to me anytime.

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  • RainbowGirl257
    January 27, 2008
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    moving stuff


  • Naznomarn
    January 12, 2008
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    Aww sweetness. Anyway. Nicely told.


    • i-love-my-bra
      January 12, 2008
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      ty

      thanks so much for commenting it makes me feel happier, if you'd like to know, i've found a few better songs that i can also relate to


      • Naznomarn
        January 12, 2008
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        nps! and yes please

        • i-love-my-bra
          January 13, 2008
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          hmm?

          are you a guy with really long hair? i mean, your hair is even longer than my brothers, that is if you ARE a guy...?

          • Naznomarn
            January 13, 2008

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            oh, yes. I am a guy. My hair's longer than that now. It's just past my shoulders now. And longer than almost all of my friends And almost all my friends are girls.

            • i-love-my-bra
              January 13, 2008

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              lol

              i wasnt sure if you were a guy with long hair or a girl so i was worried i might offend you XD , do girls seriously have THAT short hair? i would never cut off my hair! it takes years to grow, as you well know!!!

              • Naznomarn
                January 13, 2008
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                Yes! It's taken me 3 years to get mine this long!! My parents are always complaining about it though And it gave me a bit of a shock when I saw a photo of me and one of my friends at the Christmas formal do, and both our hair looked almost identical!

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