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cosmic sigh

 

 

remember the gentlest kiss

which sets free the cosmic sigh

from deep within

 

or the warm breath on your neck

that awakens your entire body

sending shivers from tip to toe

 

 

 

that simple knowing glance

from across the room

that tells an entire story

 

 

 

thinking of new love

that brings blush and smile 

which cannot be contained

 

 

 

it is this capacity and pausibility

that gives me strength to believe

in the possibilty of being there again

 

 

 

 

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  • knot2tangled
    January 29, 2008

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    All hopes should be as heavenly!

    What great hope in the future for the warmth of love - you drew me into this etherial dream.
    Thanks for entering, I loved reading this.

    Knot


  • creationsfromheart
    January 25, 2008
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    Beautiful and a true show of faith in what you have lost is only to bring forth true love.


  • arafura gold member
    January 14, 2008

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    possibilities...

    Beautiful... there is a wonderful sensual feel to this that is understated but very effective! I love the whole flow and structure of this and your word chioces are excellent. Good luck in the contest!


    • katzmeow13
      January 14, 2008
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      Thank you, I am trying to be patient by remembering how wonderful it all can be, and most of all believe in the possibility that it can happen all over again


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    SO, SO LOVELY!!!!

    When one just about has given up for good one these very experiences happens and they once more open up and try again.

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