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Nonpareil

in form

she whispers

soft midnight sighs

liquid cream

framing ebon eyes

 

she excites me

 

in presence

as well as thought …

sensual daydreams

tomorrows fraught

with entanglements and arching cries

 

she reminds me

 

of mortality sought

in wet kisses   

wrapped between silken thighs

 

revelling in knowing 

where pure bliss lies

 her absence ...  a living hell

 

she grooves me

nonpareil

 

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AP sister

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    What a wonderfully penned write, such divine imagery. Wonderful work! All the best in the contest with it

  • Black Rayne
    November 12, 2008

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    I am speechless
    you didnt add which position you would like.
    please do so, this belongs in the prelims


    • malkinpuss
      November 12, 2008
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      Black Rayne

      Thanks for the head's up. I put AP sister in the author notes. I have never had a sister but always wanted one, but she would have to be very special. Somehow, and I never can predict why, you spoke to me. Thanks for liking it.


  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    January 28, 2008

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    Oh I love this!!!!! This is so sensual, loving, and just hot in a very sex way. I love the picture to go with too. Very well done. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck.


  • AngelsDemise
    January 27, 2008
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    wonderfully penned.....a stunning write


  • secberm
    January 11, 2008
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    Curious...


    • malkinpuss
      January 11, 2008
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      secberm

      Now, now .. ... curious... how?

      • secberm
        January 11, 2008
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        Curious as in it speaks to me subtly and I can't pin point why.

        mortality sought in wet kisses
        wrapped between silken thighs
        to revel knowing
        where pure bliss lies

        Love these likes. Love the photo.

        DEZ


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    January 11, 2008
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    Oh this is stylish for certain!!! Lovely words. Thanks for the entry and beat of luck to you!

    Az

    • malkinpuss
      January 11, 2008
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      azyln

      Gee thanks! But you caught me in the act of editing! I do my best once the pic is in and it is posted ... for some reason the white editing page is so NOT inspiring!
      But thank you for your kind words just the same!

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