She lays there
motionless with sarrow
Gathering at her feet
Slit from her throat to her belly
Comfort in such a dead beast
Wonderless and full of hatred
Motionless dawning as maggots
Seep into her soft white skin
I slip a knife to her ear
I cut it off and gaze
She is dead lovely
Wrapped with the morning dew
Laying in a ditch next to our
old high school where her boyfriend
took her to fuck and kill
Her virgin blood spilt on his body as he
thrust in her and sliced her navel
She cried out but all in vain
She still staring in through
the rain, the dogs from the street
Come and merry meet as they chew off her feet
Once gone the body is gouged and sliced
Worms crawling in and out as her beautiful naked
body lay there in decay legs a-spread.
He killed her for every moment he had ever
felt a lustful need for her pure untouched
flesh. She is dead lovely for all that she is.
A contest entry
- Dark Poetry Contest by Romily.
365 points, ended January 25, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
can you pick it apart?
Comments
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wow OMG wow great write bloody hell it blew me away reading it
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Nice write. But you have to check some errors there in your piece.."sarrows" that would be 'sorrow' I guess, and "hatered" that would be "hatred".
but apart from these few mistakes the entire piece was uniquely unique.
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errors fixed
it was ment to be very dark and demented lol
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good but deeply disturbing
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it was ment to be morbid and dark
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It accomplishes that in spades
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explain
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