Crumpled in the corner
She sits and she rocks
Whispering his name
Through her raven black locks
Her chipped black nails
Claw at her face
Bringing new tears
At the thought of his face
The scars on her arms
Stream bright scarlet red
She whispers aloud
"I wish I were dead!"
"The pain is too much
My heart can't withstand
I'm the only one playing
In this two person band"
Feeling regret, loss and suffering
Depression and pain
She wants him to come back
But her cries are in vain
Up the length of her arm
She drags it once more
For her life must be taken
To settle the score
A contest entry
- Dark Heart of Agony Contest by SchizoChic.
450 points, ended January 13, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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I really liked this
I loved how you campared the ove as a band
thanks for entering
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My heart can't withstand
I'm the only one playing
In this two person band
Feeling regret, loss and suffering
Depression and pain
She wants him to come back
But her cries are in vain
Up the length of her arm
She drags it once more
For her life must be taken
To settle the score
I loved the ending more than anything.Good job & good luck!!
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Very well written, such a horrible pain you have described, for too many it's unbearable. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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